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Sylvanna - Book I, Chapter 1: Page 5 by dawnbest Sylvanna - Book I, Chapter 1: Page 5 by dawnbest
I've noticed that the page views have been up ever since I introduced the girls into the book... wonder why that is. :)

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MagicRat Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013
Kick ass and take names little dudes!!
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dawnbest Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
*flex!* XD
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darkspeeds Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Another great page, the last panel is simply ACE. 


We get to see the girls in action - oh yeah! And damnit Zac, stop being so hot (love how you drew his charge towards Mr. Avian intruder on panel three).


Now the only thing I'm slightly confused about this page is on panel two: Was there contact with Aya's kick (aka her foot) to Mr. Avian intruder's chest? I can clearly see the hit mark but if he was meant to get hit on that panel what lacked was his expression towards that impact of Aya's kick to his chest. That expression to me was more like a "Huh?" or "What th-"... If Aya kicked me like that I would've been like: "UGGH!" "Grrk!" with one eye closed at least to indicate some sort of reaction to her kick (ala pain).


The follow up on panel three was perfect - I can definitely see pain/stress in his eyes (he's closin' both - yes!)


Anyways keep up the awesome stuff! You also put a lot of effect into your backgrounds (which is another thing readers and artists take for granted) - you add that swirling dynamism to the BG's perspective - creates tension and drama which is very nice. *thumbs up* :+fav:


Did I say that Zac was hot? Oh yes I did, and don't worry I'm straight. XXD But I also admire when the guys do their thang! Go kick ass boys (and girls!)

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dawnbest Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Heheheeee - gosh I love reading your crits, hon. And thank you so much again :)
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darkspeeds Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure! 8-)
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StaricoHoshi Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Damsels in distress? Nope, don't see none of those here.
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dawnbest Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I try! :D
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StaricoHoshi Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Breaking the stereotype is always good. ^^
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mistypine01 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Excellent comic art, Dawn.
This is how your fight as a team.
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dawnbest Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Truth! :)
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