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Sylvanna - Book I, Chapter 1: Page 3 by dawnbest Sylvanna - Book I, Chapter 1: Page 3 by dawnbest
Page 3 and the first shot of Sendra Village, the home of our heroes!

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glitcher Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Finally got around to reading this. After being underwhelmed by that side-story with Xixa, I'm happy to report that the beginning of this comic feels like a marked improvement. The scenario is explained more clearly and the pacing is more deliberate. I admire your layout of the '"Genesis" of Sylvanna and I can sense the legend of the crystal will play a larger role in the developing plot. Characters are established at the start with Bashu is the impulsive hothead and Zachary as the more mature individual. It will be interesting to see how they resolve the crisis with the Avian pilferer(s). I hope this comic continues to improve, Dawn!

Oh, one tiny gripe, I'm confused about the layout in this page. I imagine I'm looking down at the village from the treetops, but why do I see the sky where the ground should be? :confused:
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dawnbest Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah apologies for the wacky angle - the bats are high up in the trees there. I'll get used to drawing the village as I go I'm sure. It bugs me too ;) But hey, glad you dig!
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MagicRat Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
Bashu's facial in the third panel is hilarious!
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dawnbest Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:D
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mistypine01 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Excellent comic art, Dawn. Beautiful work with the characters and the background. Has a great 3D effect in the first panel.
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dawnbest Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks luv! Still working on the details of the village as I go, so it's been a challenge!
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mistypine01 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I understand. It looking good so far.
I know how that goes. I'm learning to write again and trying to learn how to write details, places, bgs and characters as I go.
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AssassinsCreedgamer Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
....And with that, those two have already the status off "Favourite Character" in my book...
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Amazing amount of detail in the background and the characters look great too!
Keep it up!
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dawnbest Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:D
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SorcererLance Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Student Filmographer
I seriously love the level of detail in the background, I hardly see that especially in webcomics~
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